Weak
Designed control panels and motor control systems.
Strong
Redesigned the 24 VDC control-power architecture for six automated packaging lines, separating high-inrush loads, adding selective protection, and validating worst-case voltage drop; field brownout faults fell from 18 per quarter to three.
The stronger bullet describes the exact system, the specific design challenge (high-inrush control power brownouts), the technical steps taken, and lists a concrete reliability outcome in the field.