Weak
Increased organic traffic using target keywords.
Strong
Updated 64 product, comparison, and use-case pages using non-branded query data, intent gaps, internal-link analysis, and CRM conversion quality; Google organic clicks increased 28% year over year while qualified demo requests rose from 186 to 241.
The stronger bullet identifies the exact pages, the analytical methods used, the distinction between branded and non-branded performance, and links the search growth directly to qualified business conversions.